我啱啱都鏟完我個女嘅英文Miss,佢啲英文寫唔掂,oral 係差到無人信佢係教英文,佢嗰啲唔係流利英文,只係講嘢快,我坐喺個女身邊聽佢上 Zoom, 呢位 Miss 嘅英文和對學生嘅語氣,連我呢個見慣老屎忽嘅人都頂唔順,想一巴一巴車埋去,呢啲英文教 Phy Chem Bio 我可以接受,教英文係害人不淺。
英文盲想問嘢呀…
Fundraising activities 係咪因為當日得一個活動所以唔應該用plural?定係activity 呢個字係特別情況先用plural 例如類似fishes 同fish 嘅分別
The total amount of donations is 點解唔啱嘅?我睇係個is 係refer 緊amount
Students who …. would receive… 點解would 係唔得嘅?係咪will 會好啲嘅意思?但點解would 係話錯嘅?
第一個我覺得冇錯(呢度上面解釋嗰度寫錯),Our school has always actively encouraged students,即係講緊由一開始已經係。寫 Our school always actively encourages students 都唔係錯嘅,但冇咁靚/formal。寫 present perfect 係 formal 做法,好多學校都係咁樣寫。
第二個我覺得係錯嘅,的確寫 activity 好啲,因為下面都係寫 activity。
第三個我覺得冇錯,report 一個 fact,就係 it is HK$3,000。
第四個我覺得係錯嘅,on the page 會好啲。
第五個我覺得有錯但冇錯,小學都教 would 係 politeness,絕對好過用 will。但邏輯唔通,因為後面寫已經派左,就冇理由用 would receive。
後面嗰個先係錯,應該寫 the badges have been distributed to students on 1st November.
中間冇堂就係改簿。小學生尤其語文科改簿特別要小心,中文要捉筆劃長短,英文要捉 grammar、spelling。如果係名女校就還好,如果係仔多,啲字打風,要一個一個字「解讀」都浪費好多時間。仲要搞招標、報名比賽、打電話畀 SEN 家長跟進。有啲老師係財務組要定期開會通過招標,有啲係學術組要開會講學生目前業績同預期,有啲係訓導租輔導組跟進學生行為情緒問題,有啲係課外活動組要講比賽練習彩排,有啲家長教師會要傾義工安排、親子活動。依家仲多左個郭骹公民組。